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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Interesting premise.

But sex was described too matter-of-factly. No real details, just saying that something happened isn't erotic.

No conversations between the women during sex? No "Yes". No "Right there". No aking for it to be faster. Or slower. No conversations between the women about how Mark was reacting to their love making. No conversations directed at Mike to ask him how he liked watching them. What would he like to see next?

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Stupid

No sane person would put up with this treatment

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaos8 months ago

The guy deserved better than that. She could have at least let him have an orgasm at the end of the night since she had already skipped his last one by a week...No love or respect or decency to be had.

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaos8 months ago

She also should have unlocked the Kali's teeth after the neighbor left.

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