All Comments on 'Our Little Secret'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great

Please do a second chapter. This is a hot story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent

Amazing stuff, please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Best literotica story I've read in a long long time.

ben_kiwiben_kiwiover 13 years ago
really great

extremely talented

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Come on!

Been checking for a follow up to this story for ages. get on with it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
good fkn Sht

one of the best stories i have come across ever,

your the fkn man !

get in there when your in her house!

im now a big fan

peebudypeebudyalmost 13 years ago
OMFG!

What a great story. I usually don't read stories that are 4 pages long, but I jerked off twice and was left wishing for more. Please do write the follow up chapter....I thought the owman in the theater was going to turn out to be Gemma.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
'Jenny!' I exclaimed as I walked in on my step-sister, ..."

Erm, isn't she supposed to be the guy's wife's sister?

His Sister-in-Law?

Otherwise, great story.

Almost as good as one entitled "Quarrelling with Kaylee", by en_extase

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Another!!

Please create a second chapter to this very erotic story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Awesome

Awesome story, well written and hot as fuck! Made me cum so hard ;)

FailedscoutFailedscoutalmost 8 years ago
Great Story

Another sexy dirty story from you. This was a great read.

I can't believe that all this time has gone by and you haven't told us what happens when they go to visit and meet Gemma too.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Great Story, really fucking hot!!

I really hope you write a second chapter to this story, I would love to know what happens when they visit Jen and Gemma

ProfDavrosProfDavrosover 6 years ago
Scary sis-in-law

Scary-good sister in law. Fun story, I liked the tension and confused desires. Some of the auto-spelling-bugger up words were confusing and odd grammar (span is to stretch between two points of support, spun is the past tense of spin) distracting. Looking forward to the trip to see Gemma and Jen in the next episode.

elnegm1983elnegm1983over 4 years ago
Another perfect story

I am in love with this story since the first few words. Massive appreciation to you and your imagination..!!

just_a_horny_guyjust_a_horny_guyover 2 years ago

Great story, loved it and would to hear what happened next!

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