All Comments on 'Our Little Secret'

more please

Loved every detail. These characters meld so well together. Cannot wait to read more.. Hope there is a part two.

Thank you for writing this story

This definitely needs to become a series!

Love this story, Hope to see more chapters, and see how is their relationship outside their house.

More please

Loved the characters, they're both so likable. You'd be way better off finding a volunteer editor through Literotica, it'd definitely help the grammatical & structural problems that made your story a bit difficult to read, but, wow! I really hope you have plans to write a follow up to this 'cause that'd be wonderful.

Great characters, loved the details of their connection.

This really needs a follow up. Very hot sex.. Cannot wait till there's more written about these two.

I liked this story. It could've been cut down in length a little, but I understand how some things just progress the way they do. Alex is a lovely and very likable character. You could definitely have more fun with this one, but as a one-shot it works well. Cheers.

I have to admit her revelation caught me off guard, but it's a great story.

Enjoyable, but the thing that made me mad was the bit about him having a beer (or few). It proves to me that Americans are still far too Puritanical. OF COURSE older teenagers are going to drink, and in the home, amongst family, as long as they don't overdo it what the h*** does it matter?

Excellent story I loved the romance between the two I would love to see you continue and expand this world and this story.

Great characters that need more written about them!

A very erotic tale and what you said about her swaying her hips side to side was very interesting. I'm gay and I crossdress. When I am being fucked, I love to take my partners cock all the way to his balls and grind. There is something about that sideways pressure on my ring and the way it makes his cock move around, stirring around in my insides, that just drives me crazy!

"The Force Awakens is my favourite Star Wars film!" Unreadable.

I know it’s been two years and if you read this please continue writing new chapters for this 🙏

Outstanding ! I loved all the mental images the words were giving me.

Just loved every word. You are so talented. xoxo, Di

Not quite a brother/sister incest, but close enough. Seems like Derek accepted things quick enough when his little head was taking all the blood from his big head. Nice story.