All Comments on 'Our Sisters Wedding Pt. 01'

can't wait for more of this story

Loved it more please

A great begining

It lacks polish. Swirls like some kind of nightmare. Time doesn't seem to flow properly. You aren't very creative with names which adds to the noise disturbing the flow.

Seriously, I enjoyed it but please stop with overuse of the cockblocking knocking on the door.

Good enough for five stars. Looking forward to part two.

Tc

Fantastic. Loved every minute I was reading it. Looking forward to the next chapters. 5stars

My ultimate fantasy would have been to fuck my little sister before her wedding. Closest I came was “accidentally” flashing my dick to her when I left a bathroom door wide open.

Great start, when will you be posting another chapter ?

Boring like a manual from a fridge. 3/5 is already very friendly

Wow!