All Comments on 'Our Special Neighborhood Group'

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RodThrustinRodThrustinover 3 years ago
Good, but not best.

The sex was good, but little else was barely above acceptable. Why does Anna have an accent but her mother does not?

Many many grammatical errors. One example: there at the end, it should be "I'll accept that!" Big difference between accept and except. And that's just one.

Clean up the writing and you'll have a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Looking forward to the next part.

OseekerOseeker10 months ago

Stopped reading when he took a piss...

1 star

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