by willwork4wine
Too bad you ruined a great story by using complete bullshit of an 8.5" cock.. physically that is impossible.. Average male penis is 3.5 to 5" with a maximum length of 6.5" and a woman's vagina isn't designed to handle anything over 7 inches in length (again physically impossible)_ 4 years studying medicine, and it still bothers me that people cant be bothered to do research..
Great story. Looking forward to their continuing adventures with their aunt.
I want to see another chapter or two. This one leaves you wanting more!!!!!!!
Great steady keep going be interesting to see how and where you take the story.
Not good. A caricature of a story. Only a dimwit can get off to this..
Great start, looking forward to more stories including Aunt Sam.
Great story and writing. Can't wait to hear more of the summer, I want hear about the Aunt..
considering this appears to be your first attempt at erotic story, it was OUTSTANDING.
Way to short. Story was great, really getting inti it and then bam! Over.
Good start. You're protagonist refers to himself as only being 17 years old though. You may want to edit that...
"...I'm probably the luckiest 17 year-old guy out there."
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Uh, the site requires that all characters having sex be at least 18. You're probably going to have to repost this.
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Also, the single clearest way a writer has to indicate a story is not complete is using chapter numbers for ALL chapters, not just Ch 02 and on.
Mutual masturbation isnโt as erotic as it used to be. Iโve had with sister, cousin, neighbor and strangers on a bus and plane (last two were females too). Even masturbating each other loses its appeal after awhile. 4*
A great story, I don't usually read sister/brother stories but I will be waiting for part 2
Solid start! I like the dialogue itโs mature and complete. It reads like two adults having a real conversation rather then one main character surrounded by multiple ditzy horny women who he seduces by hijinx and cock size alone. Please continue with this story. I think it has the makings of a truly great series.
Correct must be 18 yr old, paragraph 8 says he is 19 so yes correct that later typo!
That said....waiting for the next chapter(s) great start
Relly hot start, but I hope there is relationship development intertwined as it progresses. It seems you're skirting the under 18 rules here? 5* (Re: I read his sister is 19. Only mention of his age is 17...)