All Comments on 'Our Summer with Aunt Sam'

by willwork4wine

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cursrahcursrahalmost 2 years ago

please write more of this story

KrazyKumbucketKrazyKumbucketalmost 2 years ago

Too bad you ruined a great story by using complete bullshit of an 8.5" cock.. physically that is impossible.. Average male penis is 3.5 to 5" with a maximum length of 6.5" and a woman's vagina isn't designed to handle anything over 7 inches in length (again physically impossible)_ 4 years studying medicine, and it still bothers me that people cant be bothered to do research..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

good but you to edit boy age from 17 to 18

sucksexfulsucksexfulalmost 2 years ago

Great story. Looking forward to their continuing adventures with their aunt.

JustcuriousguyJustcuriousguyalmost 2 years ago

Very good. Next chapter please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I want to see another chapter or two. This one leaves you wanting more!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Iโ€™m gonna need a part two to this soon great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great start. Definitely need more

IrishCulchieIrishCulchiealmost 2 years ago

This was awesome, well written and hot. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great steady keep going be interesting to see how and where you take the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
2 stars

Not good. A caricature of a story. Only a dimwit can get off to this..

goodshoes2goodshoes2almost 2 years ago

Great. Need more chapters and I hope he turns 18 real quick.

momluvr1momluvr1almost 2 years ago
Great Start

Great start, looking forward to more stories including Aunt Sam.

TimVerfbomTimVerfbomalmost 2 years ago

Awesome! Can't wait for part 2!

Ilovetophoto68Ilovetophoto68almost 2 years ago

Waiting for Part 2 and 3 and 4!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awesome, please continue with this story. Pretty hot already!

walt555walt555almost 2 years ago

Nice! Cant wait for new chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This story has been posted before...

Cc19275Cc19275almost 2 years ago

Great story and writing. Can't wait to hear more of the summer, I want hear about the Aunt..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

considering this appears to be your first attempt at erotic story, it was OUTSTANDING.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Way to short. Story was great, really getting inti it and then bam! Over.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good start. You're protagonist refers to himself as only being 17 years old though. You may want to edit that...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great start. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

"...I'm probably the luckiest 17 year-old guy out there."

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Uh, the site requires that all characters having sex be at least 18. You're probably going to have to repost this.

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Also, the single clearest way a writer has to indicate a story is not complete is using chapter numbers for ALL chapters, not just Ch 02 and on.

LordGriseLordGrisealmost 2 years ago

I hope there's a continuation! Let him have a magnificent 18th birthday!

Lee2012Lee2012almost 2 years ago

Mutual masturbation isnโ€™t as erotic as it used to be. Iโ€™ve had with sister, cousin, neighbor and strangers on a bus and plane (last two were females too). Even masturbating each other loses its appeal after awhile. 4*

LagavodeLagavodealmost 2 years ago

Please continue with part 2โ€ฆ.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well, that would have been fun!

OldfartpantsOldfartpantsalmost 2 years ago

A great story, I don't usually read sister/brother stories but I will be waiting for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Solid start! I like the dialogue itโ€™s mature and complete. It reads like two adults having a real conversation rather then one main character surrounded by multiple ditzy horny women who he seduces by hijinx and cock size alone. Please continue with this story. I think it has the makings of a truly great series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Correct must be 18 yr old, paragraph 8 says he is 19 so yes correct that later typo!

That said....waiting for the next chapter(s) great start

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 2 years ago
Wow, beautiful, just beautiful.

So natural, so real.

Southpaw1430Southpaw1430almost 2 years ago

I enjoyed this story. Thanks.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcalmost 2 years ago

Relly hot start, but I hope there is relationship development intertwined as it progresses. It seems you're skirting the under 18 rules here? 5* (Re: I read his sister is 19. Only mention of his age is 17...)

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