All Comments on 'Our Weekend Away'

Whew! So much sex! I loved it. Please write more of these.

This story contains some of the most beautifully choreographed and seductively erotic scenes I have read at literotica -- scenes with delicious sins this young lady narrator draws me into longing to commit with her.

Well written Katy. I would love you to experiment with some anal sex as well to complete your escapades!

The writing in this story is excellent, but it could have used a more extensive introduction to the characters and a better explanation of how things came to be. The love scenes are beautifully written, if rather too short, and the ending is rather too abrupt. That said, this is a very good work for a first time submission by the author.