All Comments on 'Out Cold, On A Summer Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Are u writing a sequel

Premise,

Rich guys preyed on young girls

Now knocked up

Both of them

Lawsuit

And everyone living together

Girls don't trust boys but trust savior

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wrong point of view.

Good non-consent is from the girl's point of view.

auhunter04auhunter04about 9 years ago

rescue is rescue, to not prevent the actions you become a participant and I hope your son and the girl's fathers beat the living shit out of you

did not finish this piece of shit

Nephlim14Nephlim14over 9 years ago
Applause

Pretty well organized story please make a sequel

candymamacandymamaover 12 years ago
well

i can say this story was a total bonus awsome

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