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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Outstanding story, very erotic. The only real negative point was the length of time she potentially meant to wear the nipple clamps. More than 15/ 20 minutes is pretty much the safe limit.

Other than that it was scorching hot! Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Paul4playPaul4playabout 2 years ago

Excellent!

Raw sexuality, teasing intensity, pent up carnal desire…..remarkably orgasmic…..

Thank you!

hazporthazportabout 2 years agoAuthor

Tess (uk), thanks for pointing that out. Yes, in real life they should not be worn that long at all. A little fantasy leeway on my part (maybe with the imagining of some fantastical clamp that might be safe for longer). As always the difference between reality and fiction should not be overlooked.

AlexaDrakeAlexaDrakeabout 2 years ago

Great story! Love the idea of this and how you worked in so many little details of the lifestyle to make a really sexy story. Thanks for sharing!

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Hazel Porter explores the many facets of life both on and off the page. If not tied up by work, she is probably exploring a new erotic adventure with her characters. But truth be told: Hazel has a knack for exploring themes or chatting with characters while working. Yet, she d...