All Comments on 'Out of the Night'

I can't wait for a part 2!

I really enjoyed this. The story will continue?

Please write more!!

This story is amazing, but there's no consistency in the tense of your writing, which makes it awkward to read at times.

A great start to what I hope is a longer story. I will be on the lookout for part two.

This is the best story i've read on here in a long, long time. please write the second part, i can't wait for it!

I commented on Sacrificial Lamb that I hoped you continued to write and I'd like to repeat that comment. I really do believe you're talented and can go pretty far with your writing.

This one is great as a stand alone, but it could become a series, and people would love it!

Amazing story. Definitely one of the best crafted stories on here..please keep writing

Fun Morbius spinoff

Please write a book. I’m begging you!

Please make this into a longer story! It’s so good!

Love love loved this.

You are an amazing talent! This is the beginning of a beautiful erotic love story. As others have said this could be the start of a series that would sell millions of copies. I urge you to turn this into a full novel and send it to publishers I know they would love it as much as we do. Keep writing please

You have some serious talent. I honestly can see this as novel and published. I would buy it in a heartbeat. I sure hope you continue this story. I’m hooked to say the least. Thank you for sharing a little part of you with us in form of story telling

Nice work ! 5 stars

Just what my soul and heart needed and craved. Soon as this comment posts, I'm reading the next chapter. Hope to read many more chapters of this story.

Was an amazing story. I truly enjoyed it. Shouldn’t have read it at work though.

I do hope there is a continuation and that I can find more of your work

I need this as a full romance novel lol

I have a bond to this story and need more! The moment where she asked if he would give her a name. What a beautiful revelation of their dynamic.

Thank you for the story- it’s not the typical fare I see from this site, but it stands on its own. Quite dramatic- it could have been a full urban fantasy novel if expanded, with gaps filled in that aren’t available in this format.

Too good, man!

Great story. Well written, interesting, captivating.