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My father had long ago allowed himself to feel emotions again. When I'd handed him his first grandson after I'd given birth, he wept. Once he handed him back, he kissed my forehead, whispering he loved me even more. I knew what he meant. His little family was now even bigger.

It was a glorious spring day. It was warm but the breeze off the ocean kept the worst of the heat away. Nearly everyone headed into the water for a swim before gathering back on the sand. A cricket bat and tennis ball was pulled out of a bag for everyone to play a game. The portable barbecue was set up so the meat could be cooked. Snacks were opened and shared around. No-one really drank. It wasn't needed.

Dad put on a shirt and shorts, took my hand, took the hand of his wife, and led us away from everyone. We walked for a few minutes, both of us eventually snuggling into the side of the man we loved above all else. Mum loved him so much, you almost dreaded something happening to either of them. But my love for daddy... My wife joked she still wondered if she'd wake up to find herself alone, heading next door to find me snuggled up next to Mum and Dad. I'd done it often enough at the farm. Cathy thought it adorable, making up for all the times when growing up that I'd miss his hugs to keep me safe after a nightmare, or the tickling and cuddling of a morning when I'd come in to wake them up.

We stopped, taking in the view of the ocean, standing in silence as we listened to the waves breaking on the shore. A light wind kicked up sand into our lower legs. "I love you both so much," my father said softly, "I honestly don't know how to put it into words. The easiest way to put it is that you both kept me alive. You took a broken man, Cathy, and put him back together with nothing but all the love you had in you to give to me. And your love for me is what kept you going, munchkin, as much as it was my love for you." He sighed. "I don't just have one best day of my life. I have too many. The first best day was the birth of you, munchkin. I remember the promise I made, that I'd work my arse off for you to provide the best life I could give. I believe, despite the trials and tribulations, I've kept that promise. The next best day was marrying my wife. I hope I lived up to my vows."

She kissed his cheek. "You've done so much more than that," she whispered, hearing the catch in her voice.

"Next after that? Seeing my sister for the first time in five years. The guilt has diminished from both of us, but we almost have to reassure each other from time to time. Everything is now okay. We're family again. The woman I see now is not the one I grew up with. Best days after that? Birth of my other four children. Honestly, my heart is just fit to burst most of the time just walking into a room to see them together. Best days after that? Reuniting with my first daughter and every day since then. No matter how hard life gets at times, even with the comfortable life we now have, I just remember who I have waiting at home for me." He kissed my cheek. "My first born." He kissed his wife deeply. "The absolute love of my life," he murmured.

"I love you, daddy," I whispered, kissing his cheek. I then left him with his wife, walking back as my wife walked towards me. Giving me a soft kiss, I turned to see my father and his wife. The stroke of his fingers over her ear. Caressing her cheek. The look in their eyes. I'd never seen two people more in love. The kiss they shared... If there was anything that expressed the love those two shared, it was in that kiss.

I cuddled into my wife. It wasn't awkward watching them. It was just two people still deeply in love with each other. They eventually did notice us watching, both of them chuckling as Cathy laid her head against his chest. "I love you too," she mouthed in my direction. It was either too or two. It was probably both.

Taking my hand, my wife led me back towards our family.

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A/N -- Holy crap, for a first romance story, that was over 40000 words. I hope you enjoyed it the entire way. Edited it all as best I can, but with so many words, there might have been an error or two I missed. Apologies for that.

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oldtwitoldtwitabout 8 hours ago

Yes a good story, well laid out, and nicely written, oh I can hear some shouting that you didn’t burn the bitch, but it is how you wanted it to be.

BigGuySC24BigGuySC245 days ago

Absolutely a wonderful story, Would have love to she Sally go to jail for what she did. So many people are stealing kids from the other parent to satisfy their need. Keep writing and look forward for the next Romance story.

JBird11JBird1113 days ago

Well written, good.sorry, really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

gofakyusefgofakyusef19 days ago

Decent story. There's just one thing that I found absolutely implausible: his own mates keeping the bitch's betrayal from him, and even supporting it, daughter kidnapping and all. That bullshit would NEVER happen. That would explain why it's never mentioned much, and I don't think there was even any effort at all to explain it. It's not like there's a shortage of words in this story to fit that in. lol

Tarloso2Tarloso221 days ago

Reread it regularly..both sad and happy. Emotional writing done well

juanviejojuanviejo29 days ago

STILL LOVED IT........CINCO ESTRELLAS!

SecondFiddle8159SecondFiddle815929 days ago

Good job. Very well written. God bless you and please continue writing.

roveroneroveroneabout 1 month ago

Wow!

great one... and long...and number of comments shows not alone in liking...

really likeable characters-well most all...

enjoyed Katie and her wife teasing her dad...and that they waited so long 'to do it...'-!

really surprised haven't run across this author before...easy 5/fave

going to have to backtrack to see how got here ....think it might have been An Unexpected Reaction-another strong stand-up guy getting hosed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Best story I have read in years. I have read it 3 times and it gets better each time. Props to you for your writing.

wilson711wilson711about 2 months ago

WOW!!!!! This is absolutely one of the best stories that I have ever read. Romance, suspense, loving wives (both actual and extreme unfaithful) with tremendous character development.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Thank you so much for your wonderful story. As a 70 year old man, I'm not afraid to admit that I cried a lot.

daves_not_heredaves_not_hereabout 2 months ago

Holy crap! Intense story!

I really enjoyed it!

5 stars

Cracker270Cracker270about 2 months ago

Reread. I lost this one a couple of years ago. Just found it again today. In my favorites now. Great story thank you

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Third time and still brings tears, not bad for a tough 75 year old pops, he thinks

DessertmanDessertman3 months ago

A great story, but would have benefited from better proof reading and editing.

oldebarristeroldebarrister3 months ago

One of my favorite stories—I re-read it at least once a year.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Really sweet! Thanks for writing it!

oldgraycatoldgraycat3 months ago

Great story, lots of ups and downs, and some crying.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Didn't like the lesbian added to me it took away from the story. He should've went back to his so called family and filed law suits against them for forgery.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Just read for the fourth or fifth time!

Still gets me sniffling!

5*

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

FANTASTIC! 5 stars

goodshoes2goodshoes24 months ago

Second time through. First was at least a year ago. Better the second time. Phew! Damn good writing. Please keep going with more. Thank you.

Sshine32Sshine324 months ago

I come back to this story every so often. It still evoques tears and anger and just plain love. Such a wonderful story. Too bad I can't give it 5 stars ever time I read it.

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