All Comments on 'Outer Demons'

by AlexMarkov

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ticklishsolesticklishsolesabout 4 years ago
Oh. My. God.

Thrilling. Exciting. Oh to be taken and molded as a pet in service to another. I too eagerly submit.

Ticklishsoles

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I see that castlevania reference

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Loved it!

The ending was absolutely the best!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
not my cup of tea

but well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very good, extremely arousing, right up until the time he turned into whatever the hell it is he turned into. After that, meh. Three stars.

rogueKlyntarrogueKlyntarover 1 year ago

This was a very balanced mix of my two major fetishes: succubi and femdom. I would have liked a longer, more drawn-out process before Allen finally gave in, though.

Like Anonymous before Roukeadams07, I think the very end was weird. Personally, I think he acts too freely as a "whatever the hell it is he turned into", it just doesn't seem to fit with Irinsha's behavior.

ZithabeziningiZithabeziningiabout 2 months ago

Beautiful erotic horror, I wish you can continue. Very good and interesting ❤️💛🩵I've read it many times

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