All Comments on 'Outragious Behaviour'

Fantastic. The mind boggles. Can't wait for more. Please.

Nice tale, but spoiled by numerous errors that would have been removed by Word or Google Docs. The fact that they weren’t, suggests a lack of pride in what you write, which doesn’t fit with a few excellent and rather sophisticated lines. I’m puzzled! I hope you keep writing because you have a lot to offer your readers. Use of a decent grammar checker, even without investing in Grammarly, would make your work much more enjoyable. Watch out for ‘voluntarily’ and check your speech inside quotes: everything inside is what was said, so putting ‘that’ in the quotes makes no sense.

Excellent story - did not notice any errors of grammar as the story’s flow was so good. Would not have cared 2 hoots anyway! Eroticism is the prime factor.