All Comments on 'Outside It's Warm'

great story.....felt like I was there...

It evokes an experience of long ago...

Some great descriptions. I think you could in future stories (hope you write more) you could enhance them with more plot. What are her thoughts and feelings about exhibitionism? How would she react to the idea of someone watching her (you do need someone to see if you are exhibitionist). Maybe place her at a setting such as a lake or beach where she might be seen.

Keep writing, you have only begun!