All Comments on 'Outside the Lines'

I loved this story! Very erotic! I wondered if it was written for me, so much of it is my fantasy and it just got me going and thinking.

This story builds and builds and is incredibly hot. I didnt expect what happened- He is really in to making her feel sexy.

This is hot, hot, hot...the author gladius major is not just a writer, he is a weaver of the erotic...drawing the reader into the fantasy where the reader becomes his completely, making the reader's pussy wet and already craving being taken outside the lines...

This is an incredibly sexy story...the heat and the forbidden and surprising way he shows her he loves her....

By far my favorite! So incredibly sexy

I came so hard when he had he bent over the hood and then came again as he ate her pussy and sucked the juices out of her. Sooo hot! This makes me miss the days where I had a slut master who would send me out. Giving up all the power and control was so sexy.