All Comments on 'Over the Fence'

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69stroker6969stroker69almost 2 years ago

Wish I were James. He found what I would love to have, a lover with a nice hard cum filled cock that I could share my life with. I liked the story. Thanks

Sunnydaze361Sunnydaze361almost 2 years ago

Great story - loved the way the relationship developed between James and Callum and the hot man on man action to boo!

scargazerscargazeralmost 2 years ago

This was exquisitely writtem with beautiful prose and warm characters. Bravo! Well done!

SpiremanSpiremanalmost 2 years ago

Great story and build up - the only thing missing for me would have been some anal sex going on over that weekend.

dnsontndnsontnalmost 2 years ago

Wow! Wow wow wow. Let me find another word. More? Not necessarily more of James and Callum but more of your writing, mysteriousacts. Powerful prose. Evocative and erotic. Beyond Five Stars! I couldn’t choose a favorite line if I was paid to do so! All of them. The whole thing. I could gush for another paragraph but I’ll end with another single word: Bravo!

Lars420Lars420almost 2 years ago

That was really fkn hot !!!

Jon_98092Jon_98092almost 2 years ago

Great story. Well executed in character development and plot. It has potential for more chapters to develop where things go with them. Awesome first submission. Congratulations.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

What an absolutely beautiful story. From beginning to end it was descriptive and very well written. And who wouldn't love to have a HEA ending like this. This story is worth so much more than just five stars. Thanks, MLF

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love Callum's blond-haired chest! Love the blond swirls of hair that gather at the center of hi chest and cascade downward to that great cock! What a great specimen on a sexy man!

mysteriousactsmysteriousactsalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you so much for the comments, everyone! I was quite nervous, and couldn’t have asked for a better response. So grateful!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved it! So delicious!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please post the 2nd part 🥺🥺🥺🥺

Foggybottom81Foggybottom8111 months ago

Need more. Wish I had a neighbor like that.

ReaderforpleasureReaderforpleasure10 months ago

Loved it. So very well written. Love stories like this where there is development of characters and not straight into making out. Love a story that starts out and "slow burns" but with the passage of time the heat becomes more and more intense. Please consider writing further chapters, I think any of those who have read this one crave more. I know I do!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Wow, so well written and HOT. I'd love to meet a neighbor like Callum

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