by mysteriousacts
Wish I were James. He found what I would love to have, a lover with a nice hard cum filled cock that I could share my life with. I liked the story. Thanks
Great story - loved the way the relationship developed between James and Callum and the hot man on man action to boo!
This was exquisitely writtem with beautiful prose and warm characters. Bravo! Well done!
Great story and build up - the only thing missing for me would have been some anal sex going on over that weekend.
Wow! Wow wow wow. Let me find another word. More? Not necessarily more of James and Callum but more of your writing, mysteriousacts. Powerful prose. Evocative and erotic. Beyond Five Stars! I couldn’t choose a favorite line if I was paid to do so! All of them. The whole thing. I could gush for another paragraph but I’ll end with another single word: Bravo!
Great story. Well executed in character development and plot. It has potential for more chapters to develop where things go with them. Awesome first submission. Congratulations.
What an absolutely beautiful story. From beginning to end it was descriptive and very well written. And who wouldn't love to have a HEA ending like this. This story is worth so much more than just five stars. Thanks, MLF
Love Callum's blond-haired chest! Love the blond swirls of hair that gather at the center of hi chest and cascade downward to that great cock! What a great specimen on a sexy man!
Thank you so much for the comments, everyone! I was quite nervous, and couldn’t have asked for a better response. So grateful!
Loved it. So very well written. Love stories like this where there is development of characters and not straight into making out. Love a story that starts out and "slow burns" but with the passage of time the heat becomes more and more intense. Please consider writing further chapters, I think any of those who have read this one crave more. I know I do!