All Comments on 'Overly Friendly Mom'

by IrinaLobos

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Did you bother to proof read this mess?

Simply awful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Not bad

I like how simple a concept it is, just good enough. There's some slight problems here and there but still a pretty decent read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
overly friendly mom

Becca who?

IrinaLobosIrinaLobosalmost 7 years agoAuthor
OH SNAP!

Look at that, it's the magical girl Becca who shows up for a split second when you stick your dick inside a girl.

Or in other words "accidentally uploading the draft that can be uploaded cause it uses 'television' but says Becca and has more typos" ah well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Why are people so offended by reading other people's stories, entitled silly people.

Keep writing and ignore the people who lack comprehension.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Missteaks

Yeah, there are some, but I too hope you'll keep writing because you've got quite a nice storyline going here. I hope you'll write more chapters for it.

If voting was available I'd give three stars; the same story without the errors would get four, from me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
LIKE your story VERY MUCH. Very EROTIC & totally REALISTIC. EROTIC ASPECT of the story is UNDERSTATED on purpose.

:)

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Howdy, just here to write some goofy fun stories, that's about it really.