by IrinaLobos
I like how simple a concept it is, just good enough. There's some slight problems here and there but still a pretty decent read.
Look at that, it's the magical girl Becca who shows up for a split second when you stick your dick inside a girl.
Or in other words "accidentally uploading the draft that can be uploaded cause it uses 'television' but says Becca and has more typos" ah well.
Why are people so offended by reading other people's stories, entitled silly people.
Keep writing and ignore the people who lack comprehension.
Yeah, there are some, but I too hope you'll keep writing because you've got quite a nice storyline going here. I hope you'll write more chapters for it.
If voting was available I'd give three stars; the same story without the errors would get four, from me.
:)