All Comments on 'OverNight Train'

This is more of an erotic couplings story than a loving wives tale.

Definitely the wrong category. Reclassify this tale.

Thank you, it was a good laugh...

Well written and funny, but in what century (maybe 19th) has this action took place? Nowadays being a mother of two and still so naive? I know that for this story to be a little funny she had to be like that, but...2* HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL

You painted a great story,,, got a smile on for the day thanks

Fucking a strange women in a railway car while her two children slept. What if? Not even paulsable .

More of a bad movie scene than a story. Mildly entertaining but not a serious writing effort even at being funny. Seems like you might be able to write a good story. This wasn't it.

As many stories as you have posted here there must be a reason for you posting this in Loving Wives I and others do not see. Or you spent ten minutes writing this and posted it just to keep your ego up. 2*s

Way too short and much ado about nothing. This was barely an opening paragraph. A waste of time. 1 star. Author - try to write fewer stories that are better.

annony is the saddest excuse for a human anyone has ever seen. BTW asshole of LIT I gave this a 5

for effort and content. I gave this a 5 asshole of LIT

LOL 4*

Authors can delete comments. They CANNOT delete the scores submitted! A lot of people score without commenting, but those scores ALSO count for the overall average!

I always enjoy the off-center thinking of Ashson (or, in this case, that of his partners!)

What it doesn't say is that he slipped the children some Nyquil caplets under the guise of candies, lmao

To where, may I ask? You certainly couldn't do this on the XPT Melbourne to Sydney. (It's all a bit open in the carriages these days.)

Maybe it happened back in the days of steam? Remember the Spirit Of Progress? Now, that was a train on which you could do all sorts of things.

But you do write some wonderfully humourous tales. This was a good one.

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Poster child for vote manipulation.

I rated this story 5* before I realized it didn't belong in the LW category, but I don't give a damn because it was a funny story. Thanks Ashson.

Trust Polyliver to think drugging children is funny. She is a hoot.