All Comments on 'Overtime Ch. 01'

I liked how he stopped short of actually fucking her until she changed her mind and begged for it. Of course, he didn't make it easy for her to keep from changing her mind. He teased her quite a bit, albeit in a way she clearly didn't mind so much. It was much more reluctance than non-consent, and I very much doubt that she is going to press charges. Yes, it was a thoroughly hot tale.

I give it my FOURTH 5 of the night and again look forward to reading more of this writer's work. Apparently, she's a newbie (hence the typical beginner mistakes, such as long paragraphs), but I think that she has a lot of promise.

I could feel her frustration and I loved how he teased her consent out of her.

I don't comment on stories but I really enjoyed this one.

I loved that she wanted it too and it wasn't just like some of the "rape" stories in this section.

I loved it! The sex was great! I want more from you! I Just thought it was a great read.PLEASE! Keep writing

looooved it

This was a great story....well written and thought out. Could this be based on your experience somehow? Man, I would sure like to trade places with Marcus. Great job!

Liked it a lot :)

Will you fuck her in her tight ass next???Please 😉