All Comments on 'Overtime Ch. 02'

I really enjoyed this submission. It was easy to read and has the desired effect. Well done, I hope to read more of your work :-)

As someone who devours erotic (i work at a bookstore) I must say that was very nicely done. Its hard to bring in a third person in a story without it seeming to sleezy. Nicely done hope there is more to come....now I need to be excused for a moment or ten lol

I am reading this at my office right now and am sooo wet. I want to read more! I love that you started with the sexual tension, went to the non-consentual sex and ended with group sex on this one! Mmmm, so hottt.

A lovely lady with a lovely mind..More..More!!

more more more more more

As an office worker, that seemed very real to me. very very hot. Brilliant. Loved it a lot.

A very hot MMF. Looks like they are going to keep dipping their pens in the company ink. I certainly hope so!