All Comments on 'Owned Mary'

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Repost of your original?

There's new new in this.

I ran out of humiliation by daughter

Yawn-fest at 5 pages, but at 20, barely worth the effort to tab over to the last page and comment.

Seems exactly the same as the story published last year

WHY is this listed as BDSM?? Blackmail does equal CONSENT!

Looks like the only change of this story was the title.

What chapters have new postings?

very bad

How can a 37 yr old be in in a hustler 1982. I'm 38 I was born in 84

"Owned Teacher" goes back to at least 2008

Is there a new chapter coming ? I hope so.

We must all be missing something here. Why a repost with a different title of a story 3 decades old? Yes, it was a classic in its day. Is there some plan to continue the story? The author or poster needs to clarify his plans. He has thousands of followers that are most curious.

Too long and unsatisfying ending

Parts were very very hot, other parts were gross like shitting in the back yard and being ATM stuff with shit references...that's such a small market. Now the spanking, the condom filling, the dancing at a club...all good stuff. the forced exhibitionism...the hints at Amy the 8th grader wearing sexy outfits...all very hot. Being taken to a barn and horse fucked..now that's nasty and hot. Being left naked to walk home, that's sexy and hot. Being put in a cage and pissing outside..not so much.

can't wait to see what becomes of Amy

Repost of old story? Why?

What have chance?

Why not post the story in Chapter insted of one 20 page story?

Anyway. I hope there will be new chapters...

This took a nosedive from implausible to outright stupid in a hurry.

Lisa will make Mary take Bubba as a boyfriend in his discreet shop at school. Since Bubba has a black wife named Bessie, he will get her interesting in becoming Mary's Mistress in which she will discipline Mary for her sexual shortcomings in shaping her to become a wanton slut for Bubba and to ensure she is impregnated.

Lisa will ensure Amy starts learning about black culture by having Mary create a curriculum based on black culture in Bubba's house under Bessie's tutelage until Mary questions Bessie's competence and pisses off Lisa who slaps her across the face several times and makes her strip naked for Bessie to pull her ear across her legs for an ass reddening spanking before showing the stunned mother her college degree. Lisa makes Mary give Bessie authority to discipline Amy or Mary during the class. Mary tells Bessie and Lisa that this will increase Mary's workload as she is not getting paid for teaching Amy. Lisa feels offended and arm wrestles Mary to the floor hurting her shoulder blades until Mary apologizes profusely to Bessie before disrobing naked and apologizing on her knees and getting slapped across face by victorious Bessie.

Lisa makes Mary stay with Bubba and Bessie as they work over the black culture curriculum as a team.

Amy enjoys weekend with Lisa and newfound independence from Mom.

Bessie lords over Mary as she dictates the new curriculum for naked Mary to write up with pencil and keeping mouth shut with a plug stuffed in.

well I didnt liked harsh ending, I hope u will write slutty and erotic for Amy. Non consent and cruelty is different. so far your story is good I hope you wont get offended and try to understand my feedback. Keep it slutty, risky but not cruel. waiting for next part.

Page 11 CHAPTER 21 has a 15 year old child having sex.

Then you might want to check https://literotica.com/s/owned-teacher-by-thumb-1?page=11

This is not permitted on literotica.

Hottest story on this site, keep it slutty and humiliating but consentual

Excellent story. I can’t believe it stayed hot for 20 pages,. I hope there’s more.

In some places, the story is not bad, but... The author often took up one idea, then another, but he never brought one to the end, turning the work into an outright mess. Did you have to cut your skirts? Forgot. Need to drink a lot, but you can not go to the toilet? Used only once. Why before that she drank 4 liters of water is a mystery. Can't peek into the lunch container? Fired once and forgotten. Choose an outfit for your daughter based on her half-naked photos? Not used at all.Became a stripper? Forgot. Biggest cork? Forgot. Did you start calling your daughter respectfully? Once remembered and forgotten.

But these are trifles, since the main problem of the work is Lisa's illogical and absurd orders. Gather 6 condoms every day for the rest of your life? Seriously? Does this require a slave? You could just continue the topic of making money in a strip club. Let five women see pussy in a sports club? And how can this be checked at all? Go to the toilet only on on one's hunkers? And how to check it? And so you can talk about many orders that cannot be verified in any way, but for some reason the main character fulfills them unquestioningly almost from the very beginning. By the way, about the club... What happened there at the very end - is another circus that defies explanation. Yep, this is how they get into a strip club - through compromising evidence in the form of prostitution and drugs.

But the main problem - unrealistic. This is especially felt when everything is explained by the "Masonic Conspiracy". Seriously? Half of the school are slaves and masters? Even the husband's boss, who did not let him return home, sending him on a new business trip? How convenient.

I also want to add that the transition of the main character to a slutty whore is very poorly worked out, given the huge number of chapters and text. Literally immediately began to suck members and give herself to everyone she met. Yes, the author hints with all her might that she is a whore at heart, but it still doesn’t work that way. Due to the abrupt transition, it was already boring to read from the middle of history, since Maria had already sunk below nowhere. What is the meaning of further movements? She is already in the first half of the story ready to work as a prostitute.

And what I personally did not like was the meager description of the actions and many important little things that form the big picture.

In general, the story is not bad, but not for this amount of text. It seems that the author shoved almost all the ideas that were in his head, but the overall picture looks like porridge. It seems that a lot has been said, but little is to the point. Of the similar ones, I liked the story of "The making of an office slut" by Mr Creator more.

And yes, it's "Owned Teacher" (2000-2001).

I apologize for the stuffiness, but I had to speak out.

Anyone have any other stories similar to this or did someone finish this story? The ending is soo hot

Story would have been better if Lisa started giving Mary more cuddling hugs and interwining kisses with tongues to reward her for being more submissive to Lisa's commands. Instead of making Mary throw away her clothes to punish her, Lisa would make her cut off sleeves to show off her luscious arms to all in the class. About her dresses, put Mary to work cutting off a little above her knees discretely. Give her loving kisses to make up for her husband's absences but prepare her for conversion to lesbianism. To change Mary's attitude from being a stauch conservative to a more rounded liberal, look at how she relates to black girl students, does she ignore them and favor the high achievers among the white girls. Introduce Mary to meeting with the black parents with an attack plan to improve their scores on curriculum courses and smile more to the parents.

About Amy who is enjoying her freedom from Mom's constraining rules, make Mom apologize to Amy and watch Mom take over Amy's cleaning jobs to give her more freedom with her girlfriends. Lisa could make Mary slow down the high achievers girls by giving them fewer A's as puzzlement turns into insecurities when they see the black girls getting A's.

Ultimate goal would be for Mary to ditch husband, quit teaching job, sell house and move to city where the poor congregate as they slowly renovated house with Mary getting a job bagging groceries to swallow her pride and Amy making friends with black boys and girls. For Amy, college is a nonstarter. Eventually Lisa will introduce Mary to black cocks and meeting black men

Don't think old hustler pictures will make someone submit to that. Believe her husband and she could patch things up with her daughter. I hated Lisa as she was mean cruel sadistic and absolutely heartless. Couldn't finish the story.

Too long needs to be shortened

There needs to be a closing, everything is still in the open