All Comments on 'Owning a Maid Harem Ch. 02'

Terrific story! Thanks

Perfect cliffhanger. I figured he would add his sister as a maid and his friend that keeps texting him, Bella I think her name is.but with mom and Cali, that makes 4 maids. I wonder who lucky #5 will be. I cannot wait to see each of them receive their gifts.

Excellent story, more mysticism and darkness than some of your other stories. I'm impressed with your ability to write multiple scenarios, as well as the way you dwell in descriptions of the orgasms to make them really intense and vivid. Another good work.

He's enjoying being 'master', but just doing what Cali and then his mother tell him.

Still a lot of repetitive sentences and words.

Mom was going to say get your naked asses out of her room but they trapped her with the power of the garter. It should only work through free will, after being told what it meant to be a maid/sex slave, then if they ask for it.

My horniness was anxious to get his sister involved but even then I had apprehensions but now I feel bad that his sister's life will be stolen. It takes all the fun out when their forced by magic powers. Plus mom having a baby girl so incest daddy can rape her and turn her into a maid is wrong.

I hope I don't get disappointed and pissed and not finish, it had wonderful opportunity to be awesome...

Bro. Repetitive sentences and words. You got to snip that. Your ideas are good. Your concepts for what happens and the plot are nice but the massive repeat of phrases is lazy and weighs down otherwise very good writing.

Yeah, I have to agree the whole story has promise, and it could be good, but you repeat the same shit so damn much. I ed up just quickly skimming it not really reading it at all.

Great premise, terrible execution.