All Comments on 'Owning a Maid Harem Ch. 04'

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This fantasy is straight from some video game with semi-developed characters. Keep on writing. 5 stars.

Great work so far. I can't wait for the Dominatrix-maid to be owned.

Great story. Please continue with more chapters. 5stars

Love the story.. the only thing I would say is the over use of delight was distracting and you referred to her ass as her pussy a couple times which messed with continuity.

It is certainly a hot story, but you can’t seem to keep straight that his cock is in her ass when you talk about it being in her mouth, her cunt, her snatch and other terms used to identify her other holes.

Wow! What a hot story.

I just can't read your sex scenes. Horrible, just bad. I like the premise of your story, which is why I keep reading. I want to see what will happen. There is so much potential in this story. Try a bit of character development and less of your repetitive, monotonous (see what I did there?) sex.

Your story badly lacks character development which has already been pointed out by others unfortunately, that’s stopping me give you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.. sorry

The sex scenes are actually the worst aspect of your stories because you seem to just cut and paste the same handful of phrases again and again with just the names substituted for each girl. You don't even keep track of which orifice your MC is penetrating from one sentence to the next. So bad it's kinda funny.