All Comments on 'Owning My Favorite Cam Girl Ch. 01'

MORE!!! I can't wait to read what happens to her next.

Please keep going. Your story is a great first chapter to a longer tale of owning the cam-girl.

I was amazed to find that this is your first story. You must continue... and soon!

Loved loved the story

Thanks to everyone who read and enjoyed my story! I appreciate the feedback and comments. I have submitted chapter 2 and have even finished chapter 3. This is the first story I have written and have learned a few lessons from the experience. I hope that you will find the construction, grammar, and punctuation much improved in the upcoming chapters. Thanks again!

Ferris

Hi,

really astonishing well written story, in particular considering it's your first work. I'm looking forward for the next chapters to come and hope you have an equally dense and long story in mind...

Thanks!

This chapter was well thought out, written, and presented. I hope the following chapters are as well done.