All Comments on 'Oz Beach Boy Fulfils Xmas Wish'

While an enjoyable story, the death undertone was less than exciting especially if other options were considered such as a dangerous surgery or the daughter was hurt in an accident.

Excellent story and very well written. I hope to read more of your stories.

Tommy

Beyond sick.

The looming death element was kind of strange, but always enjoy Matt’s exposure in front of various audiences.

Thank you all so much for your thoughtful comments, they are most appreciated. While the subject of death and dying is understandably unappealing to many readers of erotic fiction, I wanted to set this story up as a "last chance", "last Christmas" type situation. I also wanted to attempt to introduce a little pathos into one of my stories. Thanks for reading a story like this (clearly spelt out in the story description) and for taking the time to comment. Hugely appreciated, as always. 🙏 🎄🎅

Well written and the incorporation of a difficult but normal storyline, worked well. He could have given her a little fondle, and his extreme belief in being God’s gift gets a little annoying, but you did it with skill. Rare to find someone who uses the English language properly and understands plural and singular uses of areola and labia too. Thanks