All Comments on 'Pain and Pleasure'

by Theunrealem

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
please continue

The grammatical errors are frequent enough to be disruptive to the stories flow. That said this is a very hot start and I hope that there will be more :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
why bother?

Why bother with such short nothing?

3StrawberrY63StrawberrY6almost 2 years ago

Great. When can I expect chapter 2?

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