All Comments on 'Paladin Ch. 08: The Future is Bright'

How mean! I guess Raya won't consider Simon her hero anymore. Nice story overall, though Zeff's death in the previous chapter came a little bit too fast. I expected an epic final battle.

Ha ha

Hopefully this isnt the actual epilogue...

I can't say this was an _unfair_ ending, considering everything you've put poor Raya through, but I still hoped for better for her (and Simon...). Which means you succeeded in getting me to care about the characters!

I am begging you to write a prequel about Zeffs time with Raya.