All Comments on 'Pale Painter Ch. 010'

Came to this story late and haven't read much of it. What I have read lives up to the standard of the previous

a 5 for you

I don't think the quality of your writing will go down with the next story in this world setting just a different part of the whole.

Maybe Edgar can wish for the three of them to have a more harmonious relationship. Bram just might like watching two women get it on.

Somehow Literotica has chapter 10 in the second position after chapter one . That really sucks for you . Because I will now skip chapters 2 thru 9 . I know the ending . Perhaps I will return later to read the stories in between . You need to ask them to change that .