by ElleAira
Good to see a new Pam/Office story. The gold standards in Office storys are Pam earns time off in shocking ways,on literotica, and More like a week, on the Archive of our own Office fanfiction site. What makes them good is that they have believable backstories as to why Pam let's her guard down and has sex with someone other than Jim or Roy. Its difficult to come up with a believable scenario where Pam bangs Michael or Packer or some lucky neighbor..but when you can come up with a great storyline it makes the story so much better. When the reader thinks,, " yeah I could see Pam being so mad/jealous/drunk, that she'd do that...you're on the right track..
Having said that, this is a good start, keep it going, looking forward to more
As a big ntr fan, I love the concept. However, the writing quality is not good. Spelling mistakes, inconsistent verb tenses, and robotic sounding sentences are all throughout this chapter.
Really enjoy the thought of Michael fucking Pam. Love to see your take on that
Do one of Pam having a 3some with 2 guys that are not Jim at her house a night that Jim & her throw a big house party