by majicman21
So they have a couple hours until John gets home are they going to make a move. Is this the last for Pam and Tanya? Hopefully the next one will be Pam visiting Tanya for a weekend.and making a gang bang video for hubby to add to his new collection. Possibly having there daughter find the movie and ask mom about it and joins them for a weekend of debaucher. Love your story here and hope you continue in the future.
I hope Tanya meets John and gets to fuck Pam in front of him, and then fucks the life out of John next!
I hope Pam tells Cynthia. I'd love for her to get one of her best friends involved with Tanya.
I liked the story and it is pretty well-written. However, at this point the story is quite repetitive. The sex is good enough in description terms, but the dialogue, sex and D/S lacks enough variation. The d/s is at the level most novice teenagers will experiment with - I certainly did at seventeen - and never extends many boundaries. During sex the two main characters rarely use anything other than the same cliche lines in a few differing orders. Best scene of the series so far was the first one in the bar alley, and it's a shame it started with a high for me personally.
Don't get me wrong I liked this story series so far, but I just could see it as being so much deeper with a more varied and nuanced dominant dialogue driving it, and some wilder and distinct sex scenes. Please keep writing though, as this isn't the first of yours I'v liked reading.