All Comments on 'Paradise Found Ch. 01'

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Monmusu_Writer almost 5 years ago

Interesting start

However, I did find it a little hard to tell when there was a POV change. Can you make this more obvious, such as by using underline instead of italics?

Nexte100 almost 5 years agoAuthor

@Monmusu_Writer

Thank you for your suggestion. I will definitely edit the text to make it more obvious when PoV changes occur, and will keep this in mind for future installments.

Wargamer about 1 year ago

Different, good imagination. I enjoyed the story and look forward to more.

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