All Comments on 'Paradise Found Ch. 02'

Shame about changing POV all the time. To me it destroys a good story.

Thank you for your feedback. I do agree that it was probably excessive in this chapter. No excuse, but these were originally written for a different forum format, and I posted much shorter chapters, so often it would simply be a single pov switch per chapter (and at the beginning of each). I agree that this doesn't work well for a longer with like this. Rest assured that future switches will not be quite so frenetic. Thanks for reading.

Very creative, and well told!

A five all the way