All Comments on 'Paradise Isle - Faun Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

another great chapter. wouldn't be nice if Willow took more control of Liam's cock like maybe putting it in a chastity cage. please keep writing on this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I really like the mermain and faun stories. Hope you have more ideas!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I liked it a lot, and excited to read the rest!

Completely unrelated to the story, I recommend tagging your stories with "body modification" instead of just "modification", as that one is much more widely used.

ChangeYourPasswordChangeYourPasswordover 1 year agoAuthor
Thanks

As always, I appreciate the feedback. I'm very pleased by the positive comments on this fantasy story. Part 4 is on the way. (I did change the tag to 'body modification')

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Fun continuation of their story. Though was disappointed and rather put off by her becoming more assertive and dominant in their relationship.

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