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Click hereThat night they again had wonderfully enjoyable sex, but they didn't spend the night together. He left admonishing her to spend her Sunday relaxing and preparing herself for school on Monday morning.
She wasn't sure if she should be excited, or worried about that.
To be continued...
From the Author: Please comment on my stories. All thoughts, positive or negative are welcome. If negative, please extend the courtesy of providing constructive criticism. Thanks.
If you do comment, check back in a few days, as I do try and post replies.
- COMMENTS
LazyDiogenesabout 1 year agoSkilled writing but all the piercings are too much for me. I don't have that kink but if you do, this is the story for you.
tartheartabout 1 year agoI liked anon's pov about the cutting of the clit hood. I like PI stories too. If she still has a "personality" I'd like to see a rebellion at some time.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoThanks for an other fine chapter, this one real hot - and going real good in the details of modification - the way I was missing - until now - in the whole Paradise Island tail. I don't understand all the struggles about the piercings, some readers seam to have - at least she wanted her body nice and was willing to sell herself into slavery for three years. If she is as intelligent as mentioned in this chapter, she must have known that three years will a slave, will not go without any remaining changings - at least of her mind, which is also necessary to live with her new body. I guess the slave training will be much more a challenge for her to endure, with much more changing her personality, than the piercings and for shure will be not as easy undone. One of "my" favourite chapters so far and something I was really waiting for from the start and not only nipple piercings, knowing all your earlier submissions I was expecting something like this. Please continue that way and as always 5* - just ignore the non constructive critiques and keep on your way - JtL
Anonymousabout 1 year agoI'll just add my 5 cents that much of the resulting piercing "damage" or deformation may be fairly easily corrected with plastic surgery. In a partially fantasy setting like Paradise Isle, most likely everything can be reversed at the end of her contract... Question remains how much, if anything at all, will she want to correct ;D
ChangeYourPasswordabout 1 year agoAuthorGood point. That piercing does qualify as 'permanent damage'. But, she can remove the ring...
In any case, as someone else wrote in my defense, your tone doesn't qualify as 'constructive criticism'. So, why do you bother commenting at all? Did that aspect of my story upset you so? Try and be helpful, not disparaging.
