All Comments on 'Paradise Isle - The Mermaid Pt. 01'

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mouse4472mouse4472almost 2 years ago

I love mermaid stories, please continue this one, many thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It's a unique story, but I just can't see anyone paying a ton of money to go to a sex resort, then quarantine themselves into a costume, without a lot more emotion and argument. I know my wife would say, "fuck you, you put it on while I walk around looking to get laid." She's an adult, not a child at Disneyland.

davevsr1davevsr1almost 2 years ago

A little different, but I liked it

OOAAOOAAalmost 2 years ago

Really original story!!!! Congratulations!!!

postoak2020postoak2020almost 2 years ago

Flawed concept

More negatives to accepting the mermaids role for ten days than positives if the goal for ten day resort stay was bonding emotionally and physically

ChangeYourPasswordChangeYourPasswordalmost 2 years agoAuthor
A ‘flawed concept’? Perhaps

But fantasy fulfillment is a popular theme, and a realistic one. I’ve known many young women in love with the mermaid dream. And many adults, as well. Sorry you don’t see it…

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I write these stories because I enjoy the writing, and because they sexually excite me. When I publish them, and you read them, I hope they entertain and excite you, too.

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