All Comments on 'Paradise Isle - The Pony Pt. 02'

Well written and a joy to read

Great start. Let's see if she wants to stay at the end. She could work for the government of the island. They surely want to build more holiday resort related stuff. She could plan part time and be a pony most of the time. To become a pony-architect. :D

I like the idea with the hollow butt plug in the comments. But that will be a messy affair. Perhaps one where she still has control of her bowels?

Oops, sorry for the double post.

But she surely wants to stay. It has been a big transformation for her, it would be a pity to waste that after just 2 weeks. Would be better suited for 2 years. :D

Great continuation but please correct the spelling of ‘trough’ for what horses drink from. We have a lovely stone one outside our 200 year old cow barn.

It's getting more and more interesting! Good boy. Write other that you are good at provoking interest