All Comments on 'Paradise Isle - The Pony Pt. 04'

I like the story and the way it is going forward would like to read that she is bred some more before she leaves being a pony girl

Different and Interesting. Most stories involving submission have the bottom in a constant state of joy or pleasure/pain or generally enjoying the experience. In this story, its a trial, and she doesnt like large parts of it at all.

Great story can hardly wait for the next chapter. Scott should of stepped in to the paddock after Anthony had put in there and reclaimed her by making his pony girl give him a BJ in front of everyone, to further humiliate her and to dominate her as a true master or owner..

Oh boy please keep write a couple more chapters, sorry to say you’ve got me hooked..