All Comments on 'Paradiso Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
And the vacation rolls on!

Can't wait for chapter 3! You're a pretty good writer. Erotic. Graphic. Not too long to get boring. Not too short to leave anything out. Keep writing!

Fog43Fog43almost 10 years ago
Great kickoff!

Please keep up the contris! Very enjoyable.

thornpthornpalmost 10 years ago
More please!

Really getting into it - please write faster, I'm looking forward to finding out how horny the English schoolteacher is ( I had a few at school that kept my dick hard in class - ok 40 years ago, but miss deeming was HOT)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hot - need more soon

Damn - I can't wait for Ch 3 - loving the group aspect of the sex and orgy's. My toys couldn't keep up with my reading! I had dildo in my cunt and my vibrator at my pussy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
So amaze! Much wow!

This is one fine story -- please, do continue!

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