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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
You are..

That was weird... And wtf kind of crazy. Still tingly and want more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
That was fun

I really like this style, a sort of choose to have no choice adventure, i like to play along and say things out loud looking forward to more of this style thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Loved this

Very engaging

SBstoriesSBstoriesabout 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you...

... for the comments. A bit of a crazy experiment. Glad it was enjoyed on some level.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Interesting

Usually I hate the hypnotise yourself style entries like this, they don't work for me at all, but I've read this one four times now, I don't know why but it's so good. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Wonderful

I tend to not like the hypnotize the reader submissions since I just get bored, loved this one though and can't wait for your next batch.

SBstoriesSBstoriesalmost 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you once more.

I've written a "sequel" to this experiment earlier this month but it's an exclusive piece. Find out how you can read it by visiting my site.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Wow

How do we get to your site?

SBstoriesSBstoriesalmost 5 years agoAuthor
Check...

my profile. Thanks.

sexymeupsexymeupalmost 5 years ago
pure bullshit

was a waste of time.one star.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This is a beautifully constructed induction and one i revisit regularly. Thank You for sharing it!

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Simple Being, middle name Creative. Writer and artist with a penchant for themes of Female Dominance, Hypnosis, and Mind Control. My thoughts are my own except when they're not. I write micro-fiction, flash fiction, short stories, create femdom mind control captions and photo...