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WinterHarvestWinterHarvest2 months ago

I've always loved your Velma and Shari stories. Are you intending to offer fuller versions of each of them?

dirtyricekingdirtyriceking2 months ago

EXCELLENT story! Always a treat to read about Shari & Velma

GymTeacherYouDeserveGymTeacherYouDeserve2 months agoAuthor

@WinterHarvest: That's a great idea for me to consider. I am currently working on a couple other different stories right now, but I think I might use your suggestion as a way to practice fleshing out story arcs and expanding vocabulary while using one of the existing short stories. I did do this (a bit) with Shari Hails the Hero as I wanted to make it a little darker to contrast with the relationship between Shari and Velma.

But, yes... I may do this in the future. Thank you for the idea!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Every update to the Shari/Velma story is better than the one before. You are really getting to know your characters well.

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