All Comments on 'Parent-Teacher Meeting Turns Horny'

The constant tense switching is irritating as are the many errors.

"Were drawing penises" Try "We're"

"We do to." Try "too".

'"It's you two who no idea," I retort, shamking my had' That sentence is just chaotic.

""Well somebody seems to

"Well somebody enjoyed the show," she says." Does she have a stammer?

and that's just some from the first page

Proof read your story, or even better, get an editor. If you can't be bothered to read your story, why should we?

This is the single greatest story i've ever heard

Love the FFM, love the anal (two of my favorite tags). Agree with the content of the first critique, if not the tone. Please accept the help of a a proofreader/editor; your content will be better. HMU, I've done it before. Keep writing!

How embarrassing. A typo in my post to proofread the next story. Oh well.