by LunaDoggy
Interesting premise.
But much too rushed.
Why no 'normal' getting acquatined with each other's bodies first?
Why no reastaining him and them have him service her with his mouth to bring her to multiple orgasms before fucking him silly?
The whole business with the stockings was a superfluity.
The maid's involvement added nothing.
One star.
Fair enough. If it wasn't your 'cup of tea,' i accept that. I take your points on board.
Five stars from me! Extremely well written, unique story. A different premise than the run-of-the-mill femdom situations. I'd like to read more about Madame Yvette and horw she satisfies her desires.
Thank you very much for your kind words here. Oh, as you'll see from a few stories that i've recently posted, that still have to be 'approved' at the moment, i have taken note of your, very reasonable critical comments, and have 'cut-down' considerably on my use of CAPITALS. You were right, it was a bad habit that i'd 'drifted' into.
Sexy in its details of seduction, bondage and female control. Like your other tales, puppy, I find a lack of *resistance, therefore *conflict, a slower seduction into submission, that would give a more erotic edge to the story. But if it's your fetish, dear, who am I to quibble? But again, sexy...