All Comments on 'Paroled Pt. 01'

It wasn't too bad of a story, hopefully, you continue and Alison opens herself up to the idea of being with a woman because no guys are getting her off anytime soon after her orgasming like that, maybe she should get strapon f****d by Angie. Can't wait for the next part, whatever you decide to do with the characters I'm sure it'll be fun.

Good story. She actually read like a straight woman having her first time. Very good showing the reluctance I think you nailed it. Be careful though in your future stories you might forget about the reluctance part which is a good part of the charm. Turning her lesbian would also ruin this

Very hot. It actually reads like a straight women too which is rare. Very nicely done

So very hot, one of the best.

Loved it

Well written and interesting story but this is not at all a Non-con category story. This is just a plain Lesbian category story with absolutely no tension and the protagonist even told us in the beginning she had a crush on this woman!