All Comments on 'Part 01 Riley's Mistake'

We all need a second chance on occasion… Nice story, but now on to part 2

The story seems lacking. Not merely the lack of anything erotic, but the reaction of vero was simply bizarre. They seemed to have fell in love very quickly, but all the reader has is being told the conversations went well. Then at the end when they “made love”, it’s like a fade to black. Nothing to describe Riley’s first time or anything.