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MackodZippyMackodZippyover 3 years ago

Enjoyed this Brian, thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
My fantasy

Why didn't I know about this while I was younger and semi good looking. Are there any women who would want to see a naked, overweight 70 year old man....around Arkansas? I would show up in a minute.

nudedude03nudedude03over 3 years ago
Nice start

Good story. Looking forward to the next one.

AtrampboyAtrampboyover 3 years ago
Eager for the next chapter!

Excellent story very well told! I can't wait!

Helen1899Helen1899almost 2 years ago

Promising but needs another chapter or this is wasted

Emory_StrigerEmory_Striger7 months ago

Back and forth between 1st and 3rd person. If you fix this, it will be a much stronger story. Worth doing, because it's pretty good.

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Normal man in late 50's likes to read and write erotica. I am not average in any way. I am not forward nor alpha. Just a man who likes women for more than the obvious. Giving a woman pleasure is a tremendous turn on. I enjoy erotic chat on Lit. BUT there are few women and even...