All Comments on 'Partied Hard at the Male Revue'

by IWriteNSFW

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26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Can't wait

This author can't even let the whore marry him before she makes him a cuck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
OK I guess

If you don't mind having a slut for a girlfriend then I guess you are OK. Not a wife but it is a slut story about cheating since he didn't know ahead of time. I wouldn't let her touch me until at least two STD tests come back clean. I mean the guy admitted she wasn't the only one that show and who knows how many shows a day per week he does.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 3 years ago

Was bad enough until you turned it into cuck at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
"My girlfriend Julie"

Why are you in the Loving Wives section? This was awful.

1 star

iameaseliameaselover 3 years ago

"And I smiled too."

Knowing, like a real man, I was donning a condom that night, fucking the hell out her and dumping her cheating ass for breakfast the next morning.

You're welcome, I don't usually finish an unfinished story like this.

IWriteNSFWIWriteNSFWover 3 years agoAuthor

Ya'll need to RELAX.

titans2138titans2138over 3 years ago

Great story, thank you:)

skruff101skruff101over 3 years ago

Awwww! It will be a marriage made in heaven when they tie the knot, he’s a moron she’s a whore.

Can’t you just picture him feasting on many a cream pie whilst thinking ‘my wife truly loves me’ else she wouldn’t be feeding me these wonderful desserts.

Oh yes, I predict many babies of various hues in this idiots future, ain’t love grand.

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyover 2 years ago

The description of the heat of the interaction was hot but did not fit her supposedly telling him. It was not second person it was third as if by observer. I won’t criticize the cuck issues as they are part of your story not anyone else’s

Schlouis57Schlouis579 months ago

Une salope et un cocu content

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