All Comments on 'Party Mom'

Nice work, hope you keep it up.

You pancaked out of the closet? LOL

Another great high school author.

It's not "Me and my Mother," it's, "My Mother and I." The other person first, ALWAYS.

Capitalizing important words like Drinks, and Beer. I know, I know, the capitalized words are a code for someone. Cute, but not really.

The way you tell this story, you don't, "take stock," you, "took stock."

Crappy story, get's you a minus 7. Minus 8 if you're ESL.

Resubmit this in English.

What's with all of the Caps. Bad grammar. Some bad spelling. A story which could use more story. Looks more like a adolescent community college assignment than anything worthwhile.

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