All Comments on 'Party of Three Ch. 02 - Early Hours'

by forestofjack

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Just another story about a girlfriend on her way to becoming just another slut/whore without any regards to her boyfriend and yes there will be a next time because he allowed the first time. He needs to move out and find another girl who is not in the running for "slut-of-the-year!"

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 1 year ago

Better ending than the last chapter.

But I have to say, it was stated twice that you and Nick had shared women before. Surely you knew what he was like with a woman, especially a woman who would take on two guys. Not all women can handle it.

Secondly, it wasn't mentioned till the very end that you have been cheated on. That goes a long way in explaining the knot you kept feeling in your stomach, and the anxiety of seeing her enjoy the rough sex with your buddy so much.

So I am curious about the next chapter. Will you get into her love of extreme fucking and enjoy the funor become a cuck?

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