All Comments on 'Party Patsy'

by Daze_Earth

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MisGMisGover 5 years ago
enjoyed

I enjoyed your stories but like has been said before a little more detail would not have hurt, I for one would have like to know what went on in the bedroom?

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Bondage

I enjoy the stories. Add some bondage!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Keep going please

Please continue this storyline. But please add more detail in the bedroom and more sex acts and description please

Great character. I can't wait to see where you go next

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
this is the first story, isn't it?

I have already commented the other story asking for you to expand just a little your style with at least a damn summary of what happens behind the bedroom close door e.g Linda spent the next few hour on her back with the merry guests taking turns in her pussy. Now just an unimportant question/remark: judging the way you seem to introduce the characters, this should be the first story even if you posted it as the second

Daze_EarthDaze_Earthover 5 years agoAuthor
Author's reply to feedback

Thank you all for commenting. I will be making some additions to the story to enhance the scenes in the bedroom.

To the reader who asked about the order of events, yes, Party Patsy happens before Bimbo Gets Bullied, although neither are actually the first story in the series. I'll soon post the first story and many more. I haven't figured out how to change the order the stories appear in literotica as yet, but I'll try and do some reading up and see if something can be done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Five Stars

Loved this, keep writing

amfanonamfanonover 4 years ago
Great stuff

I'm thrilled to hear there is more. Can't wait for you to post it, do you have archives elsewhere?

Daze_EarthDaze_Earthabout 4 years agoAuthor
Author's update

I've updated a new version of this story. It has the additional details that many of you were asking for. Hope you enjoy this one even more now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Thank you daze!

I loved the extra content. I can't wait to read more stories if you ever intend to post new ones. Grateful for these additions. Thanks!

kolsonkolsonalmost 4 years ago
sequel?

Hey very good story, are you planing a sequel?

Daze_EarthDaze_Earthover 3 years agoAuthor
Sequel

Regarding the question about a sequel; yes there will be one. Bimbo Gets Bullied is a sequel in a way, but there will be more stories after that. I have been working on multiple stories and have many in various stages of completeness. I will publish them when they are properly fleshed out and ready to read.

looney2looney2over 3 years ago

You are a legend. More please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
More please!

Absolutely love this story. Eagerly looking forward to amy sequels.

kolson111kolson111about 3 years ago

Hope you are writing a sequel

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