All Comments on 'Party Surprise'

Well this was a hot mess in need of a proof read, wasn't it?

Very sexy. Love eating pussy stories.

another good read from you. I thought It was a little to short. two friends knowing what you did and a video sounds like there just might be another part to this new dynamic approaching. I now have read everything you have posted and ready for more . thank you for sharing.

Pappasleaze!

I'm not really sure the comments of a male writer are all that appropriate in this genre. The pace of this story was good and I found the story captivating. Your story 'The Virgin by contrast I found rushed.

I know the time it takes to write a good story such as this. Well done and keep the stories coming or should I say keep your target audience cumming.